Sunday, November 15, 2009

ATTENTION TIM

MOUTH FULL OF GOOD
OR
MOUTHFUL OF GOOD?

LARABAR TAG

ACCUChek Patty

So these are possible other visuals for my accucheck. I'm going to change the foam finger thumb into a key chain giveaway instead. The boxing glove is the second visual.


I'm thinking any of these can work with the campaign. The headlines aren't entirely finished since I'm focusing more on a visual to fit the campaign.


I've place (!!) along the ones I think can work with the campaign the best.

If more than just one work, I'd be happy to comp them out for a larger campaign. I'm going to eventually want this campaign in my book.



championship belt--


tiara pageant queen--This beauy has brains or A beauty with brains (!!)


football helmet--Score a touchdown, everytime


medallion-- Join the winner's circle


party hat-- wham bam, thank you mam (!!)


sport cap





so I'm still working on a tagline for my Accu Chek.


For tags, I'm thinking---


good for you (!!)


life's kudos or kudos


well done


embrace life


praise life


honor life


a decorated life


accomplished everyday or everyday accomplished?


ATTN: Syanne


First visual. This is what I meant of an open can. See where the placement is and how it is open. On top. Maybe turn that little knob in a shade of orange so it blends in with the orange.

Second visual. Look how the ice is just floating on top and how the sweat is trickling down.

On your fizzle. Why not use alkaseltzer and photoshop it. Its the easiest thing you can shoot.

Good luck. Your rough are very cool. But execution is not of a good quality. Remember in an agency, when you comp something that fabulous, you have to deliver it. Right now, it's a no.

Saturday, November 14, 2009




Here're my Sunkist Comps, Megan has approved the tagline written by Lori.

Ryan, I tried making the can opener looked 'opened' but when I already bought the photos, I just realized that it doesn't show the top of the orange, I hope this still works,

Laura, Scott and Mei Kim Attune Bar



Here is the redo version

ATTN TIM, RYAN - LARA

Is the tagline Mouthful of Good or Mouth Full of Good? And are they working with the campaign? Please advise :)

Ninja final?