Yes and no. Yes because your tag has a double meaning. No because you're not really saying anything good/healthy benefit on your headline. Like the banana bread. How is peeling mouthful of good.
I like the tag, but you might have to tweak it to accommodate your other lines.
First: This tag has undergone more changes than (fill in celebrity here).
Second: The concept behind the current tag is that the product is known to be healthy by its current demographic, and if we had a microsite, we would play more into that. A mouthful or a mouth full doesn't really matter to the fact that "good" could be either taste or health. I originally liked Mouth Full because it looked better on paper. But mouthful is the more accurate word choice. As per the tag not being relevant: I am affraid it is the best it is going to be.
Integrated Communications explores the process of creating big ideas that translate across a variety of mediums. Through a series of assignments, students will learn to strategize and execute high-impact campaigns.
This blog exists to extend collaboration outside the classroom by providing an avenue for students to post and critique their latest work.
Yes and no. Yes because your tag has a double meaning. No because you're not really saying anything good/healthy benefit on your headline. Like the banana bread. How is peeling mouthful of good.
ReplyDeleteI like the tag, but you might have to tweak it to accommodate your other lines.
First: This tag has undergone more changes than (fill in celebrity here).
ReplyDeleteSecond: The concept behind the current tag is that the product is known to be healthy by its current demographic, and if we had a microsite, we would play more into that. A mouthful or a mouth full doesn't really matter to the fact that "good" could be either taste or health. I originally liked Mouth Full because it looked better on paper. But mouthful is the more accurate word choice. As per the tag not being relevant: I am affraid it is the best it is going to be.