Here are my redo version. I make the background a lot simpler and I change all the Accu-Chek logo and icon to be consistence. I decided to make a cookie instead of a cake
Either the M&M's on the cookie is bothering me or the colors . Your product and logo is lost. And what's up with the Accu-Chek logo color? You can't read it. And placement wise, where are you planning to place these? The popsicle is a good fit for a billboard. What about the other 2? I would lighten up the background a bit. Try a linear gradient. Not too much contrast on the gradient. Not so dramatic.
I'd still go with a cake. It's more tempting than a cookie. And you rarely see cookies being sold wrapped in plastic unless you buy it in the city. Your target will mostly shop at supermarkets and cookies there aren't sold in plastic wrap.
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ReplyDeleteMei Kim, this looks great! Have you thought about using different colored backgrounds maybe?
ReplyDeleteEither the M&M's on the cookie is bothering me or the colors . Your product and logo is lost. And what's up with the Accu-Chek logo color? You can't read it. And placement wise, where are you planning to place these? The popsicle is a good fit for a billboard. What about the other 2? I would lighten up the background a bit. Try a linear gradient. Not too much contrast on the gradient. Not so dramatic.
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I'd still go with a cake. It's more tempting than a cookie. And you rarely see cookies being sold wrapped in plastic unless you buy it in the city. Your target will mostly shop at supermarkets and cookies there aren't sold in plastic wrap.
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