Friday, November 6, 2009

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ATTN: RYAN- how do you feel about this treatment? I left more sky so it feels more vast.

2 comments:

  1. i like this better than the sepia, i think keeping the roller coaster red is way better than without color.

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  2. Better. I liked how you incorporated that white border. An how you overlapped the copy lockup with the white frame. I'd tone down whatever effect you're using, ie. look what's happening on the top left corner.

    After that, I'd play with the rest of your campaign and you're good to go. Nice job!

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