Sunday, November 22, 2009

Accu-Chek Redo

Here are some revised version. I change the background to a subtle linear gradient and I took pictures of a cake for the third one.



3 comments:

  1. for the pie, you might want to make the lines be according to the way people slice their pies in diagonals. the other two executions translated to print arent as strong as they were. how about you use the same products and put them as guerilla on safeway.com or something?

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  2. also the ketchup packet needs red esp to distinguish from other packets. the food should still be tempting when the consumer gets their hands on it. the kethcup would probably be the best product to have as guerilla over the pie because it is is a more common and is free rather than buying having to buy a pie.

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  3. Agree with Patty, make your pie lines according to how people slice it. Also for the ketchup, makes sense to place them as guerillas.

    For some reason, the blue shade gradient you are using isn't working still. Play with it some more on how you will treat the background.

    One main thing is missing. The CTA. How will they find out more info about the product? And how will you art direct this?

    One more round of comps please.

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