LIZ - DEXTER COPY FEEDBACK

This is the copy you posted previously:

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Blood Slide Headline: My victim. My trophy.

Saran Wrap Headline: My victim. My spoils.

Syringe Headline: My victim. My object.

Also, My victim. My.........

kill

code

game

aim

kill

prey

intent

I vote on changing the syringe one to something that relates more closely with the image, like you did with the saran wrap and 'spoils' in the headline. 'Aim' is the closest that you had posted, but it seems like it could be stronger. Can't wait to see what you come up with.