Nice. I like it. But can you trim it down? Your others have less than 6 words. Keep it simple. It will be more powerful and impactful.
You want the target to go 'Huh? Really?'
My only bad comment is, you're talking about trees with the pineapple. Can you get rid of the word trees for the banana. I know it's going to be tricky, but play with it.
Just trim down copy on this and let's see what your ad looks like. Now it's your time to dress this up. Think of how Apple do their ads. Simple and Impactful. Don't go crazy on art direction. Good job!
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Nice. I like it. But can you trim it down? Your others have less than 6 words. Keep it simple. It will be more powerful and impactful.
ReplyDeleteYou want the target to go 'Huh? Really?'
My only bad comment is, you're talking about trees with the pineapple. Can you get rid of the word trees for the banana. I know it's going to be tricky, but play with it.
Just trim down copy on this and let's see what your ad looks like. Now it's your time to dress this up. Think of how Apple do their ads. Simple and Impactful. Don't go crazy on art direction.
Good job!