The second one is giving me a little trouble. Added the drop shadow to the logo lock up as well. Let me know what you think :)
Some tags we have collaborated and still need Megan's feedback from:
My Signature Kill
The Signature Kill
Signature Seal
Signature Ritual
Signature Stain
Killer's Signature
Signature Kill
Killer's Trademark
The Signature
Trademark Killing
(The) Serial Killing
My Signature
The Killer's Trade
The Killer's Mark
Leaving a Mark
Choose your Mark
Sincerely, Dexer (per Liz)
Signature Kill
Killer's Trademark
The Signature
Trademark Killing
(The) Serial Killing
My Signature
The Killer's Trade
The Killer's Mark
Leaving a Mark
Choose your Mark
Sincerely, Dexer (per Liz)
The second saran wrap print is definitely better than the first one. With the text on the arm it doesn't relate to the other prints as well as the second saran wrap.
ReplyDelete1. Place the lockup of the logo on the left hand corner. So that their is consistency throughout.
ReplyDelete2. I would do a little bit of photoshopping on this one. Crop it by the hair on the right. And photoshop the wall on the left to make room for negative space. And i'd put the lockup there.
On all of them, I'd make the drop shadow less visible. Make the font smaller by 25%.
I will forward the copy to Megan to review.