Wednesday, September 23, 2009









Shark ideas.

4 comments:

  1. I like the penalty box and the hocky stick hand rails. They both give you the get in the game feeling. This could be good, make sure you have a cohesive 3rd idea.

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  2. Yes. The penalty box and the stick handrails are your strong ideas. You just have to be innovative for your 3rd one. There are other elements during the game you can play around with.

    Nice comps for a copywriter. Make the 3rd one work.

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  3. The bus idea is ok. railings could work too?

    get back in the game (ok, more connection needed) Like outside of Jack in The Box... drive through.. NOw Get back in the game.

    Dun Dun Dun (better) Make the taxi sign connect more to the people in San Jose or the Shark.

    The ice concept is cool. You can work with this a number of ways:
    - use it in reference to the ice on the rank
    - or in reference to the cold dark sea
    - Let the Frenzy begin.. might work. It's not often we see that word.
    - fake patches of dry ice (attack the opponents)
    - don't break the ice. or Break the ice.

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  4. Thank you. I came to the Academy with the original interest in being an art director, but quickly realized that my background in writing was a stronger asset.

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