1. Be consistent on your CUBE icon. Make those circles the same as your icon (referring to lower right and left of the screen).
2. Do NOT tilt the CUBE logo.
3. Make the CUBE + icon lockup more prominent and make your other design elements less prominent.
4. Make the illustrated CUBE slightly bigger in the corner. It's getting lost. Can you try a different color?
5. Don't take out the navigation when the map shows up. Place your map on how you had visual #2 (on the right side) to be consistent. Place your SEARCH lockup on the left side where there is negative space.
Have Tim write some copy for the pages you will present. Also when you present this, put it in context. Put the web browser window so we know it's a webpage/microsite.
Continue to play around with other look and feel and maybe other color palette, just to give you enough exercise on determining the right look and feel for your target audience.
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This is much better. Here are my only comments:
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2. Do NOT tilt the CUBE logo.
3. Make the CUBE + icon lockup more prominent and make your other design elements less prominent.
4. Make the illustrated CUBE slightly bigger in the corner. It's getting lost. Can you try a different color?
5. Don't take out the navigation when the map shows up. Place your map on how you had visual #2 (on the right side) to be consistent. Place your SEARCH lockup on the left side where there is negative space.
Have Tim write some copy for the pages you will present. Also when you present this, put it in context. Put the web browser window so we know it's a webpage/microsite.
Continue to play around with other look and feel and maybe other color palette, just to give you enough exercise on determining the right look and feel for your target audience.
Nice job!