here is the copy if you cant read it
Name: Silver Ultra Guard
Vampire Repellent Spray
Advanced Formula
Lasts 12 hours
Enriched with Silver Nitrate
6 oz.
SHAKE WELL BEFORE USING
Safeguard yourself and your family against vampires with our advanced formula of Silver Ultra Guard Spray Repellent. Enriched with garlic and inert silver nitrate, it provides 12 hours of lasting protection. Our non-sticky formula has a discreet scent, detectable only by vampires that will make you unappealing to even the most ravenous vampires.
Directions for use: Spray on liberally every 12 hours for optimum protection. The proper use of vampire spray will reduce human injuries.
Contains: Silver nitrate, garlic concentrate, titanium dioxide, water, hydrocarbonate propellant, benzyl alcohol, and silver distillates.
Danger: Keep away from heat and flame. Do not puncture, incinerate, or store at temperatures above 125*F. KEEP OUT OF REACH OF CHILDREN.
Ok. The name still needs to be much more impactful. Make your design elements consistent like you logo. Why is it tilted on the can spray? Copy can be written more whitty with humor. But again i'm not a cw.
ReplyDeleteAgreed. Have fun with this. I mean, how often can you write copy for a mock vampire repellant. This is a once-in-a-career opportunity.
ReplyDeleteAlso, this line sounds weird:
"Our non-sticky formula has a discreet scent, detectable only by vampires that will make you unappealing to even the most ravenous vampires. "
Please up the FUN in the directions, contains, and danger messages.
okay, Ill work on it.
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