Saturday, September 26, 2009

Ben Lori and Mei Kim True Blood

Sorry, here is another layout for the can spray

3 comments:

  1. Watch your leading on your subhead. It's way too big (vampire repellent spray plus 3 lines). Get rid of periods in your mini subheads. Just be consistent throughout.

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  2. I think it's really nice to see how you have the 'old' style but a little grunge at the same time. this relates back to their location.

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  3. The biggest word in the comp is misspelled.

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