I fixed the print a little bit. I tried to play with the logo and headline, but it looked too busy. I like it simple the way it is. I also did the billboard. The sides of the text on the billboard will be a bit darker tho, like on the print ad.
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Place a CTA somewhere. It's missing the connection. Other wise the print ad is approved.
ReplyDeleteOn the billboard, add a CTA as well and why don't you add a horizon on the billboard. So that when you look at it from daytime, it fades with the background sky. Use 1/8 of the space for the horizon sky. That way the copy touches base with the visual (horizon) similar to how you did the islands and the visual.
Where's the 3rd execution?
coming soon, I'm not a God, I need to sleep sometimes.
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