Consistency is lacking. Make sure your lock-up treatment is consistent on all your visuals. Your tagline doesn't have a (.) on the candy and your drop shadow is way too hard on the candy compared to the others. The burrito isn't working as much, because it feels like a baked potato.
Will it look weird if you have all 3 of them opened? And your whole art direction is very plain. It's flat. It might because of the usage of color.
Can you revise this so that next time, I'll see it in a media platform. It's hard to see and approve this without seeing it in context. Do 1 for now to be approved.
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Consistency is lacking. Make sure your lock-up treatment is consistent on all your visuals. Your tagline doesn't have a (.) on the candy and your drop shadow is way too hard on the candy compared to the others. The burrito isn't working as much, because it feels like a baked potato.
ReplyDeleteWill it look weird if you have all 3 of them opened? And your whole art direction is very plain. It's flat. It might because of the usage of color.
Can you revise this so that next time, I'll see it in a media platform. It's hard to see and approve this without seeing it in context. Do 1 for now to be approved.