I redid the park sign. One has white teeth and the other more yellow teeth. I'm not sure which is standing out more. If created, the teeth would be much more obvious in real life.
I would totally go back and use your 1st two lines, the one you lost. The 3 lines presented above doesn't fit together. You have one talking about the opponents and the other 2 doesn't have the same tone. You have 2 guerilla and one outdoors. The assignment was 2 outdoors and one guerilla. Your strong guerilla is the the fence idea. But you have to find the right visual. The gate fence looks like it for residential not a public spot. The look and feel of all 3 has gone 3 different directions. Choose one look and apply it on all of them. i would definitely consider going back to your original ideas.
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are shark teeth really that yellow?
ReplyDeleteI would totally go back and use your 1st two lines, the one you lost. The 3 lines presented above doesn't fit together. You have one talking about the opponents and the other 2 doesn't have the same tone. You have 2 guerilla and one outdoors. The assignment was 2 outdoors and one guerilla. Your strong guerilla is the the fence idea. But you have to find the right visual. The gate fence looks like it for residential not a public spot. The look and feel of all 3 has gone 3 different directions. Choose one look and apply it on all of them. i would definitely consider going back to your original ideas.
ReplyDeleteDo you not like their hockey sticks are our tooth picks? i like that better than calling the shots above or below water
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