Thursday, October 15, 2009

Lines for Dexter

Ok, here are some lines we came up to work with the red and black art direction that we showed in class:
For fitting room:
"You can't hide
behind closed doors."
For bathroom:
"You can't wash away guilt."
For trash can:
"You can't hide the messes made."
For dry cleaner bag:
"You can't remove some stains."
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  1. InstructorOctober 17, 2009 at 2:01 PM

    Much better. The bathroom still feels a little awkward when you're reading the secret message. And for the dry cleaner bag, the word 'some' feels like it could be stronger. Maybe 'every' stain, 'all' stains...? Play around with it some more. You're so close.

    -me

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