Sunday, September 27, 2009

SCRIPT COMMERCIAL--BUSCH GARDENS

Introduction shot of family.

Father is reading a map, mother is picking at her shirt, the daughter is on her sidekick and the son is listening to his IPod.

The background is left relatively vague but has beautiful scenery.


Father: Well, you kids be safe and don't make me come after you guys.


Cut to shot of the Parents on a bench. They are surrounded by vague but beautiful scenery.


Father: This is a wonderful idea. It's nice to just relax and let go.


They are sipping on beer.


Mother: Oh did I mention that Grace got pregnant?


Piercing screams in the background from their children.

Parents seem unphased.


Father: Well that's great!


Piercing screams grow louder and sound more threatening.


Father: A new Nephew!

He extends his cup out for a cheers.

Mother: Or Niece!

She cheers.


The screaming continues to a shot of the children on a roller coaster ride.

The next shot is of the children with untamed hair staring down their parents at the bench they were sitting at. They seem like they want revenge.


Daughter: Mom, Dad...


Son: ...you're up.


The last shot is of the happy family leaving the park all with frizzy hair.


1 comment:

  1. Frizzy hair is interesting. What other things - looks wise - happen after you've been on a roller coaster.

    Not completely 'getting' the dialogue. Push it harder.

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