Josie, everything looks awesome! It's so exciting to see our ideas come to life. The Nissan logo on the sticky note ties everything in great. I'm liking how you enhanced the brown napkin. The texture pops a lot more. I'm thinking you might miss your cubeandI logo, but I like the handwritten one, it just fits better.
Much much better. Now everything ties in together with the personalization look and handwriting.
Put your Nissan lockup on top left and move scarlet's note a tad down.
There are little things you can add to improve your site. Nothing major, but it helps.
1. On some of your text driven pages, add a scroll bar. Even though there is only 4 sentences in the paragraph, the effect of the scroll bar feels as if there is more content. You can design a very simple one. Not the MAC look though. As easy as a line with a square.
2. On the bottom right of the frame, add legal content (Privacy & Legal, etc). Maybe copy how Nissan.com does it.
You are done with Nissan, until copy comes in. Congrats and nice job!
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Josie, everything looks awesome! It's so exciting to see our ideas come to life. The Nissan logo on the sticky note ties everything in great.
ReplyDeleteI'm liking how you enhanced the brown napkin. The texture pops a lot more.
I'm thinking you might miss your cubeandI logo, but I like the handwritten one, it just fits better.
Much much better. Now everything ties in together with the personalization look and handwriting.
ReplyDeletePut your Nissan lockup on top left and move scarlet's note a tad down.
There are little things you can add to improve your site. Nothing major, but it helps.
1. On some of your text driven pages, add a scroll bar. Even though there is only 4 sentences in the paragraph, the effect of the scroll bar feels as if there is more content. You can design a very simple one. Not the MAC look though. As easy as a line with a square.
2. On the bottom right of the frame, add legal content (Privacy & Legal, etc). Maybe copy how Nissan.com does it.
You are done with Nissan, until copy comes in. Congrats and nice job!