If you believe you have a vampire in your immediate area, one method of safety is to avoid contact by all means necessary. Stay calm and do not draw further attention to yourself. (3)
If possible, move away from suspected vampire in a casual manner, taking special care to control your movements. Do not run, as they find this behavior to be offensive. (4)
In the event, that an encounter with a vampire is unavoidable, please follow the steps below. (5)
When coming in contact with a vampire, do not panic. Be courteous and treat them as you would a fellow human. It is important to remember that not all vampires are harmful. (6)
Additional Safety Measures: (7) (list it with bullet points)
- When entering a highly populated vampire area, try to stay in large groups.
- Carry a Vampire Repellent containing a potent form of silver nitrate with you at all times
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