Okay, so this is my 1st one which is going to be the bus shelter ad. I fixed the reflection as Ryan said, get rid of some shadows under the plate, no tagline, and change the typeface of the headline.
This one's print ad. I move the plate to the right so the layout doesn't look boring
And this one's billboard.Let me know what you think, thanks.
The font is not working. This is more of a script font. What you want is something whimsical like the logo.
ReplyDeleteCopy still needs help. The 2nd one is the only one that's working.
Visuals, your reflections are out of proportion. And you need to ground your visuals. It feels like they are floating.
You can do it.