I know you have both mentioned the copy for Sharks with the little boy, so here are some thoughts i had:
1. Every kid waits for the Hockey Fairy. Make magic happen. 100% fan, 100%hockey.
2. Every child hopes to lose at least one tooth per game. Make magic happen. 100% fan, 100% hockey.
3. A loose tooth is a sign of a great season. Make magic happen. 100% fan, 100% hockey.
4. Look under your pillow after each game and the Hockey Fairy will never fail. 100% fan, 100% hockey.
5. The Hockey Fairy better rest up when the Sharks play. Magic magic happen. 100% fan, 100 hockey.
Ok, so let me know what you think. Sorry for the delay.
Looks like Megan hasn't approved or seen any of these.
ReplyDelete1. I'd go for #3. Move #3 line to girl.
2. Move copy from girl to little boy.
Once changed, this campaign is approve! Good job.