Monday, December 7, 2009

DOLE




revisions from last class


i made the orangeberry more orange and the banana into a more red orange. im not sure if it reads all too well in teh screen shots.

1 comment:

  1. One more round.

    1. Make your carton on the bus shelter 15% smaller.

    2. Align your CTA to the word 'flavor' from the carton.

    3. The color of the word 'orange' is still not strong. Pump up the contrast.

    4. On the newspaper, make sure you show the ad by itself as well. A bigger version or a close-up version.

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